You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you. Type a letter to your friend. In your letter, Invite him to stay and suggest a date briefly describe the new house and garden say why you like your new house

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Hi Kitting, I am writing

this

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letter to find you well and in good health. Recently, I moved to a new house , and I am staying alone.

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why I am sending

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letter to invite you that we can enjoy together at my new home. I would like to move the day after tomorrow. I purchased the apartment because it has good vibes to stay there,

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the house has back yard and a front yard.

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, the owner provided me with many pieces of equipment.

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as three beds, many amenities and others.

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why I love it and decided to buy the resident.

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, especially for the garden , it is really big and aesthetic to enjoy and relax in front of the window of my home, and there is a place for barbecue. I would very much appreciate it if you could join me and grow together in the long-term. Your faithfully, Ajik

Arni Aqlina

Jul 14, 2026

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task response

Answer all parts more clearly. Say the date, describe the house, and say why you like it in a direct way.

task response

Use a more natural tone for a letter to a friend. Write in a warm and easy way.

coherence and cohesion

Put ideas in a clearer order. First invite your friend, then talk about the house, then the garden, then why you like it.

coherence and cohesion

Use simple link words like and, but, so, because, and also.

coherence and cohesion

Use one main idea in each paragraph.

task response

You covered the main points of the task.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear opening and ending.

task response

You gave some details about the house and garden.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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