It is important to ensure that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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I MOST DEFINITELY AGREE WITH

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STATEMENT, AND I AM CONVINCED THAT IF MORE PEOPLE WOULD SHARE

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AGREEMENT, MANY OF TODAY'S PROBLEMS COULD BE AVOIDED AND, UNDER THE RISK OF SOUNDING CANDID, "THE

WORLD

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WOULD BE A BETTER PLACE". IF ONE IS AWARE OF THE GENERAL, WESTERN (WELL, GLOBAL REALLY) CIVILIZATIONAL TENDENCY TOWARDS LIVING WITHIN CLOSED GROUPS, ALMOST FROM "BIRTH TO DEATH", ONE MAY FIND THAT

ADRESSING

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ADDRESSING

THE SUBJECT AT THE EARLIEST MOMENT POSSIBLE IS A REASONABLE POSSIBILITY OF STARTING TO FIGHT THAT TENDENCY.

CHILDREN

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ARE NATURALLY KEPT, IN THE FIRST FEW YEARS OF THEIR LIVES, IN A VERY LIMITED, CONTROLLED ENVIRONMENT, AND

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GRADUALLY START OPENING UP TO THE

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AROUND THEM. SO IT'S VERY IMPORTANT THAT, WHEN THEY START DOING SO, THEY

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BEGIN TO UNDERSTAND WHAT SURROUNDS THEM - PEOPLE, RACES, SOCIAL BACKGROUNDS, FAMILY STRUCTURES, RELIGIOUS BELIEFS, ETC. - AS PART OF THE REAL

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WHERE THEY WILL LIVE AND BE CALLED TO CHANGE, IMPROVE OR CONDITION. THE ALTERNATIVE TO

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WILL BE, AS IT IS ALREADY TODAY, THAT

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WILL LIVE MORE AND MORE ISOLATED FROM REALITY IN ALL ITS VARIED, AND SOMETIMES CRUEL, FEATURES. I BELIEVE THESE

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, NOT HAVING HAD A CHANCE TO DIRECTLY COMMUNICATE AND INTERACT WITH OTHER

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CHILDREN

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, WILL FEAR AND EVEN REJECT

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DIFFERENCES. IGNORANCE AND MISUNDERSTANDING IS (HAS BEEN AND WILL BE) ONE IMPORTANT SOURCE OF CONFLICT, AND SOCIAL CONFLICT IN THE FIRST INSTANCE. I THINK I CAN SAY I WAS FORTUNATE ENOUGH TO HAVE ATTENDED AN ELEMENTARY SCHOOL WHICH WAS CHARACTERIZED, AMONG OTHER THINGS, FOR JUST

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A FEATURE: EVEN THOUGH IT WAS A PRIVATE SCHOOL, WHERE PARENTS WHO COULD AFFORD IT HAD TO PAY A SUBSTANCIAL FEE

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IT HAD A POLICY OF TAKING IN

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WITH ALL

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OF DIFFERENCES. I GOT

ACCOSTUMED

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ACCUSTOMED

TO HAVING

COLEAGUES

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COAGLES

AND FRIENDS OF LOWER SOCIAL BACKGROUNDS (ECONOMICALLY SPEAKING), WHO

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STATE-FINANCED TO ATTEND THE SCHOOL; WITH DIFFERENT LEARNING HABILITIES (DEAF, MENTALLY

DISAVANTAGED

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DISABLED

, ETC.); AND OF DIFFERENT ETHNIC BACKGROUNDS (ASIAN AND FROM PORTUGUESE AFRICAN EX-COLONIES). I AM VERY CERTAIN THAT

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PART OF MY EDUCATION HELPED ME BETTER UNDERSTANDING AND ACCEPTING THE

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AROUND ME; STILL NOWADAYS I HAVE ALL

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OF FRIENDS AND LIKE TO KNOW THINGS ABOUT ALL

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OF PEOPLE, AND I KNOW NOT EVERYONE AROUND ME DOES THE SAME.

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Write a short first line that clearly says your main answer in a calm way.

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Add one more clear idea about school life, such as how mixed classes help children work together.

coherence and cohesion

Use shorter sentences so each idea is easier to follow.

coherence and cohesion

Use simple linking words like first, also, for example, and in the end.

coherence and cohesion

Make the last part a clear conclusion that repeats your main view.

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You answer the question clearly and your view is strong from the start.

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Your example from your own school is relevant and helps support your ideas.

coherence and cohesion

Your essay has clear body parts: reasons, risks, and personal example.

coherence and cohesion

Most ideas connect well and stay on the same topic.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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383 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Promotes Inclusivity
Fosters Equality
Appreciate Diversity
Equitable Society
Broad Perspective
Problem-solving Skills
Real-World Diversity
Navigate
Global Society
Strive for Improvement
Unique Talents
Healthy Competitive Spirit
Reduce Social Inequality
Access to Resources
Empathy
Social Skills
Communication
Teamwork
Conflict Resolution

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