The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The bar chart and line graph illustrate how many Japanese tourists were travelling abroad from 1985 to 1995

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the percentage of tourists coming to Australia.

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, both the bar chart and line graph observed significant growth over the period. Numbers of overseas travellers witnessed fluctuation between 1990 and 1992,

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the percentage coming to Australia showed a similar behaviour two years before

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period. The number of people travelling abroad started with approximately 5 million in 1985 and increased almost equally each year by 1990. After decreasing slightly in 1991, it continued to rise and

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reached three times

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in 1995 than in the previous ten years. The percentage of visitors to Australia began with 2% in 1985 and grew approximately by 1 each year by 1988. After it fluctuated over the period of 1988 and 1990, it continued to increase and

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stayed at 6 with a slight decline in 1994.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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consistent growth
market share
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