The table below illustrates how much money a single person and a couple in Australia need on average for a comfortable lifestyle after they retire. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table compares the average weekly amount of money required by a retired single person and a retired couple in Australia to enjoy a comfortable lifestyle.
Overall
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, retired couples need more money than retired single people in every expense category. Housing is the largest expense for a single retiree,
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leisure accounts for the highest spending among retired couples.
In contrast
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, clothing and other expenses are the smallest categories for both groups. Looking at the details, a retired single person spends $184 on housing, followed by $140 on leisure and $122 on health. Transport costs $107,
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food, clothing and other items require $50, $44 and $37, respectively. The total weekly expenditure is $684.
By comparison
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, a retired couple spends the most on leisure, at $202,
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housing and health account for $194 and $177, respectively. Transport costs $108, which is almost the same as that of a single person.
Furthermore
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, spending on food, clothing and other expenses is $100, $80 and $70, respectively, bringing the total weekly expenditure to $931.

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