The diagram below shows the structures of a home smokery and how it is used.

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The given process diagram provides information about the structures of a home smokery and how it is used.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the diagram consists of three main stages. Air is
entered
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introduced
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to fire to produce smoke, which is
then
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transported into a smoking box where meat and fish are preserved. Observing in detail, there is an underground place, which
closed
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is closed
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with a lid. The air is entered from outside
to
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into
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this
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area. It is connected to a second chamber containing logs placed above a small fire. There is
also
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a lid to the upper site of the place,
which
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logs are burned. From there, an underground pipe links the fire chamber to a large smoking box situated at ground level. Turning to the
last
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stage, the smoke surrounds
around
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apply
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the meat and fish, allowing them to be preserved for a longer period. In
this
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stage
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there
is
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are
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some breaks, which are placed
the
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on the
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bottom side of the box.

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