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The diagrams below show how houses are designed to suit cool and warm climates.

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The given charts provide information about the principles used in designing
houses
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 for cool and warm
climates
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, showing how different construction features help regulate indoor temperatures.
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,
houses
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 in cool
climates
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 are designed to retain
heat
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,
whereas
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 those in
war
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warm
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,
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climates
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 are intended to
minimize
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heat
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 during the day and remove stored
heat
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 at night through ventilation. Observing in detail, in cool conditions,
houses
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 are built using thermal building materials that can absorb
heat
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 from sunlight entering through a window facing the direction of the sun.
This
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 stored
heat
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 is gradually released indoors, helping to keep the house warm.
In addition
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, insulation is installed in the roof and walls to reduce
heat
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 loss, making the building more energy-efficient. Turning to the
houses
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 in warm
climates
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, they are designed to keep
heat
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 out during the day. They are fitted with external insulation and reflective roofing materials, which reduce the amount of
heat
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 absorbed by the building.
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, wide roof overhangs provide shade for the windows,
while
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 the windows remain closed and covered to prevent hot air from entering. At night,
however
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, the windows are opened to allow cool air to circulate through the house.
This
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 natural ventilation removes the
heat
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 stored inside the building, helping to maintain a comfortable indoor temperature.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses, climates, heat with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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