Some people believe that healthcare should be free for everyone, while others think that individuals should pay for their own medical treatment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In recent years, there has been a growing debate about whether. Some people believe that......, others argue that.............

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discuss

both views before presenting my own opinion.

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, many people believe that...........The primary reason is that ............

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can be explained by the fact that......

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, many countries have introduced .........which has helped........by .........

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, ............

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, others argue that.........They claim that...........A good example of

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......, From my perspective, ..........because..............

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both views have

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merits, I believe that...........because...........

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longterm

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benefits for both individuals and society.

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task response

Score: 4. This is only a plan, not a full essay. Most parts have dots, so there are no real ideas, reasons, or examples about free health care and paying for treatment.

task response

Write two full body parts. In the first, explain why health care should be free, such as help for poor people and early care. In the second, explain why people should pay, such as less waste and more money for hospitals.

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Give your own view clearly and add one or two reasons. For example: basic health care should be free, but people can pay for extra services.

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Use real, clear examples. Do not write only “many countries have introduced ...”. Say what they introduced and how it helped people.

coherence and cohesion

Score: 4. The order is easy to see, but the links cannot work well because the main sentences are not complete.

coherence and cohesion

Make each part follow one simple order: main idea, reason, example, result. This will make your writing easy to follow.

coherence and cohesion

Do not put “As a result” and “From my perspective” in the same sentence. End the second view first, then start a new sentence for your own view.

coherence and cohesion

Fix the start. “There has been a growing debate about whether” is not complete. Write the full topic after “whether” or use a direct first sentence.

coherence and cohesion

Check small errors: “discuss” has one s, “both views have their own merits”, and “long-term” needs a hyphen.

task response

You have a clear plan: discuss both sides and give your own view.

coherence and cohesion

You use a clear four-part shape: start, first view, other view, and end.

coherence and cohesion

Words such as “Firstly”, “However”, “For instance”, “As a result”, and “To conclude” show the order of your ideas.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

95 words

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