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You have got a letter from your pen friend who is going to take an exam soon. She/He feels very nervous about the approaching exam and needs your advice to co.e over the stress. Write a letter to your friend - to wish him/her good luck - to give some tis about how to calm down before and durng the exam - to invite him/her to your country

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Dear Ana I hope you are doing well
,
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 I
heared
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heard
 that you will take an
exam
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 soon
, first thing
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. First things
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 first. I am so proud of you
, congratulations
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. Congratulations
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, you
finally
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 made it to
this
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 point. it is remain me
about
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of
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last
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years
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year
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 when you
struggling
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struggled
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 to
complate
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complete
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 your document
for
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to
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 join
to
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apply
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the university, and now you said that the
exam
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 you will
facing
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be facing
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make
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will make
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your
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you
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 truly nervous.
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however
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, I think you should not
over thingking
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overthink
 about your
exam
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,
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 I suggest you
have to
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apply
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take your time
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. For
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for instance
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, go to the beach and maybe hiking with Meli there, it
is
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apply
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can make you more
peacfull
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peaceful
 and
relax
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relaxed
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,
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apply
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 than
you
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apply
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just
stay
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staying
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 in your room and thinking
to
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too
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 much about your
exam
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.
additionaly
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, you never go holiday since
last
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 month, do not forget to pray
with god
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to God
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also
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. I want you
come
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to come
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 to my country after
finish
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you finish
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 your
exam
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. I will take you to the best place here. can not wait to see you next month. With Love Nurul

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task response
Score: 6. Add more clear good-luck words, such as “Good luck with your exam.” Give advice for the exam day too, like slow breathing, good sleep, and reading each question well.
task response
Make the invite more clear: say when to come and what you will do together in your country.
coherence and cohesion
Score: 6. Put each main point in its own short part: good luck, advice before the exam, advice in the exam, then the invite.
coherence and cohesion
Use simple link words: “First,” “Also,” “During the exam,” and “After the exam.” This will make the letter easier to read.
task response
You answer all three parts: good luck, help for stress, and a visit to your country.
coherence and cohesion
The letter has a clear start, advice in the middle, and a friendly ending.
coherence and cohesion
“For instance” gives a clear example for your advice.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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