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The maps show the changes in Liverton docks between 1980 and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.(14.06.25)

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The maps show the changes in Liverton docks between 1980 and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.(14.06.25)
The maps illustrate the changes in Liverton docks from 1980 to the present.
Overall
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, it is evident that Liverton
docks
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Docks
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 has undergone substantial redevelopment, with several new facilities being introduced and some existing areas being repurposed. The north-western
corner
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 of the
map
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 was occupied by a warehouse, which was removed to make way for an education centre.
In addition
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, the crane in the northern
part
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 of the
map
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replaced
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has been replaced
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 by a sailing club.
Moreover
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, the warehouse and the crane in the north-eastern
corner
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 of the
map
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 were converted into a
kid’s
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kids’
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 playground. The
carne
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car park
 in the south-western
corner
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 of the
map
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 was
also
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 developed
to
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into
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 a new hotel.
Following
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this
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, the warehouse in the southern
part
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 of the layout was demolished
and
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, and
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 apartments were established. More importantly, the
river
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which
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, which
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 was
commercial
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a commercial
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 route, was transformed into
ship
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a ship
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 museum. Regarding facilities, a new parking area was constructed in the south-western
corner
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.
Furthermore
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, a new
river
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 walk area was introduced from west to east in the southern
part
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 of the
river
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. A new bridge
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also was
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was also
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 added to the eastern
part
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 of the
river
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which
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, which
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 connects south to north. Another
changes
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change
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 is that a new flood barrier was established in the eastern
part
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 of the
river
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 to improve safety.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words corner, map, part, river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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