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The graph below shows the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008.

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This
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 bar chart illustrates the
waste
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 disposal in
europe
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Europe
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 from 2005 to 2008. And it
also
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 differentiates between different methods like landfill, burning and dumping
watste
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waste
 in the sea.
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 landfill reached its peak in
2005
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2005,
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 it started to slowly decrease until
2008
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2008,
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while
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 still being the
prefered
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preferred
method
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 over burning
waste
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. Burning
Waste
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on
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, on
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 the other
hand
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hand,
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 was the
method
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 least used in 2005
,
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;
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 it grew slightly in 2006 but came back to a similar amount in 2008 as it had in 2005. Dumping
waste
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 in the sea has been the
method
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 that saw
o
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a
 constant increase over the years
and
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, and
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 by
2008
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2008,
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 has been the
method
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 that reached the highest amount in tonnes out
off
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of
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 all
the
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apply
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three methods.
To
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conclude
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conclude,
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 we can see that the amount of landfill has decreased, burning stayed on a similar level and dumping
waste
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 in the sea has been the
methos
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method
 that has risen the most over the
last
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 three years.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, method with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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