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The table shows the changes in modes of travel in a European country between 1995 and 2025. It also shows a projection to the year 2015.

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This
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 table shows how the way of
tranportation
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transportation
 has changed in Europe between 1995 and 2015. Over the
years
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years,
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 the use of buses has slightly decreased
while
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 the use
us
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of
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 trains has increased. Bicycles and motorbikes,
on the other hand
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, have not changed much and
always
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have always
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had
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been
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 at a very low number. Meanwhile using air transport
have
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has
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 gained in popularity and has risen
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apply
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therefore
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. Data shows that for the future there is an uprise in
autonomouse
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autonomous
 transport and
therefore
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 more individuals will be able to commute and find
environmently
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environmentally
 friendly ways to travel.
Therefore
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,
this
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 chart clearly illustrates that the
overall
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 transportation has been rising over the
last
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 20 years and
eco friendly
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eco-friendly
 ways as means of transportation are seeing a massive rise. Through technological
innovations
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innovations,
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 the way we move will go through
massive
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a massive
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 change in the next 10 years.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "therefore".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • Transportation preferences
  • Trends and shifts
  • Technological advancements
  • Urban policies
  • Substantial increase
  • Infrastructural developments
  • Projection
  • Environmental policies
  • Technological innovations
  • Electric vehicles
  • Smart public systems
  • Shared transportation
  • Transformation trends
  • Responsiveness
  • Transport policies
  • Sustainability aspects
  • Eco-friendly commute
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