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The map below shows how Pebbleton appearance changed now and 20 years ago.

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The map below shows how Pebbleton appearance changed now and 20 years ago.
The map below shows how
Pebbleton
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Pebbleton's
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 appearance
changed
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has changed
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 now and 20 years
ago
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apply
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.
Overall
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, the area
become
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has become
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 more developed, with several new facilities being added and some existing features being removed.
Such
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 as, footpaths and houses
has
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have
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 been added. Focusing on the sea, there is not some changes,
whereas
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,
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apply
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 the main changes
was
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were
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 the new houses
were
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constructed on the north side
and
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, and
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also
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 the old fort was replaced by
children’s
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a children’s
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 playground on the
sothweast
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southwest
part
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 of the area, and a playing field was located on the south
part
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,
tennis
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a tennis
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 court was constructed next to the lighthouse. Road bridge, coast road, school, film studio and playing field remained unchanged. Pabbleton
in 20 years ago was quite different
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was quite different 20 years ago
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. There were small houses opposite to
old
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the old
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 fort road on
north
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the north
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part
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,
lighthouse
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the lighthouse
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 was on northweast side near the old fort
and
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, and
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 roadbridge was in the
easthern
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eastern
part
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. The film studio
unchanged
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has remained unchanged
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 in these years
and
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, and
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 the school is in the southern
part
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 with a lot of trees
infront
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in front
 of the school.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changed" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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