The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

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The graph displays the several types of transport used to travel to and from a job in one European city in the periods 1960, 1980, and 2000.
Overall
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, the figure illustrates four categories used to go to and from a job in one country over three periods.
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, the car was recorded as having the highest percentage among the remaining categories,
while
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others slightly fluctuated over time. In 2000, car was reaching 35
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, which is considered the biggest number during the different period,
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bikes recorded the lower proportion by only around 5
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the same period. Foot and bus were recorded no more than 15 times in 2000. In 1980, we can clearly see all the transport slightly stable with no more than 30, and less than 20 on foot.
On the other hand
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, the figure shows a significant increase by using foot in
1960
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with 35 exactly,
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cars in the same period had the smallest amount
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only above 5.
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, the bike and bus were between below 30 and 20. respectively.

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