For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter state what type of membership you have and how you have paid

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that I intend to terminate my membership with Shape Fitness

Club

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. I have been a part of

this

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group since

last

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year and am an executive member. My ID is EX55638. The membership includes access to all the exclusive amenities at all the locations across the country. I paid using my credit card and authorised auto-renewal.

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, you get a full-body analysis once a month and one free personal training session once a week. Since I joined the

club

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, I have been in the best shape of my life,

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also

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and also

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more energetic.

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, it helped me recover from my shoulder injury, as I can use my arm normally without feeling any pain in my joint.

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, I became healthier because of the nutritional program provided by the

club

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. I am relocating to Spain, and unfortunately, there is no branch in that country, as I checked on your website. I would like to cancel my subscription to your

club

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before the renewal date. Thank you. I look forward to your reply. Yours Faithfully. Aj

ajsandhu223

Aug 17, 2026

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task response

State the exact last day you want the membership to end. Also ask the club to stop the card payment and send you a note to show that it is done.

task response

Some details about the club benefits are not needed for this letter. Use that space to make your request more clear.

coherence and cohesion

Keep one main idea in each part. The two parts about health can be put together, or made much shorter, so the letter stays focused.

coherence and cohesion

Use clear links between ideas. For example: 'As I am moving to Spain, I would like to end my membership before the next payment date.'

coherence and cohesion

Write the closing as 'Yours faithfully,' with a lower-case 'f' and a comma. Then write your full name on the next line.

task response

You clearly say that you want to end your club membership. You also give your membership type, ID, payment way, and a clear reason for leaving.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear order: your request, membership details, good points about the club, and your reason for leaving.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

181 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

polite greeting
membership cancellation
benefited
annual/monthly/family/individual membership
credit card/direct debit/cash payment
positive experiences
social interactions
fitness improvements
personal reasons
financial constraints
relocation
change in interests
gratitude
procedure
notice period
courteous explanation
future rejoining
sign-off

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