The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture below illustrates the process of making instant noodles.
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, manufacturing noodles undergoes 8 steps, beginning with a truck that contains the distinct elements, and concluding with labelling and sealing the final product. The process follows a straight chronological sequence where each step relies on the completion of the previous one. The initial three steps start with a flour truck
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attached to two storage silos with a rope. The dough sheets are made by pouring the flour into a mixer that contains water and oil,
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go
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through rollers that
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flatten
them to make dough strips.
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, the dough is now cut into strips, which are
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shaped into noodle discs, that gets fryed in oil and
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dried, to be placed into cups. At
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point, vegetables and spices are added, manufacturing process is wrapped up with labelling and sealing to keep them clean and fresh.

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