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The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

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The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The line graph provided illustrates the information about household car ownership in
Britain
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 between 1990 and 2015. There are three lines, the first line showing no cars in the households of
Britain
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 is fluctuating,
while
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 the second
represnt
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represents
 one car is dramatically decreasing.
However
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, the third and
last
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with
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, with
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 two or more
cars
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cars,
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 showed a significant increase. The figure of no
vichles
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vehicles
 owned in the household of
Britain
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 decreased dramatically in
2030
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2030,
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 with 15% compared to
1990
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1990,
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 with near 53%.
On the other hand
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, the amount of one car ownership showed a major
unstablity
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instability
 from the year 1990 to 2015,
while
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 it stayed constant between the year 2015 and 2020, after that it went back to fluctuate.
whereas
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 household ownerships in
Britain
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 who owned two cars or more noticed an increase from 1990 with 10% to approxmatly 43% in 2030.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words britain with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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