Recentes figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some phychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers.

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the rise in violent crimes among youngsters is a topic of considerable debate. Some individuals say it is the result of

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and teachers not guiding them properly. In

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statement. There has been a change in how we behave with younger generations. In the past, young people were expected to pay respect to the elderly. The relationship between different generations was not equal

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teenagers would see

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and other adults like an authority.

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, some kids would not even call

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, it was easier to teach and correct them.

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from a very young age that they had to

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nowadays we

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behaviour anymore.

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fail to punish their kids, as they fear

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perceived as an enemy rather than a friend. But here comes the problem:

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don´t need a friend but a tutor to guide them, make

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see what is correct and what is unaceptable and at some point, set some limits. Feeling that there is no one behind them can make them anxious, not learning that there are

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to their acts can lead them to dangerous and

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acts. It is well known that a high percentage of criminals come from an environment of absent

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lack of guidance comes in hand with

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lack of authority.

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, there are other factors contributing to

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escalation in violence among teenagers. One of them would be the effect of social media.

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are exposed to high doses of violence with no control. A recent study concluded that by the age of twelve, 80% of kids had already witnessed a fight online.

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believe that the fundamental reason

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starts at home without an appropiate guidance, but we cannot ignore the strong influence that social media has

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