The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present
The map illustrates the changes that took
place
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in the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and the present day.
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, Ryesmouth did not change noticeably at first glance, but it had a change. The biggest removal was farmland and forest park, into a sports
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. In 1995 village of Ryesmouth was located near the sea, and there were so many places like
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farmland and forest park on the east
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, on the west
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, the street where the house is built, and on the south had a special
place
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where the sea was located, with a fishing port and next to it, there were shops and fish markets. Near that
place
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was a hotel with a cafe in front . Nowadays, in east part, a large area of farmland has been removed , and a forest garden has been moved to a large green area, where tennis courts and a golf zone
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In west
side
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, 2 houses moved into a special lively house area in the middle of the road. On the south
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were restaurants and apartments that in the past were fish markets and shops, and
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a fishing port. Added just a car park next to the hotel , and a cafe in front of
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field , still the same.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words place, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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