The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.

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The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.
The table shows information about the
increasing
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increase
that happened
on
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in
show examples
the
consume
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consumption
of food,clothes,and leisure in five
countries
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in 2002.
Overall
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, all
the
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apply
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three catigories shows increasing in
the
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apply
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usage. The use of food had dramatically raised but the need
of
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for
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more clothing and leisure had
littel persentages
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little percentage
. All
the
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five
countries
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have higher persentages on eating
alot
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a lot
. Turkey had the highest
expantion
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expansion
on the amount of food consuming 32.14% , followed by Irland 28.91%.
On the other hand
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, Italy,Spain and Sweden had
rais
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raised
less than 20%. The expenditure consumers on
cloting
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clothing
and leisure
are
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is
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less than 10% on all
the
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apply
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countries
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.
Itally
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Italy
took the
firsst
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first
place on both footwear and education
Linking Words
while
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, while
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the other
countries
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has
Wrong verb form
had
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nearly the same
persentage
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percentage
.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure patterns
  • consumer spending
  • cultural priorities
  • economic conditions
  • disposable income
  • standard of living
  • work-life balance
  • proportion of spending
  • cultural preferences
  • comparison of spending
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