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The bar chart provides information about how often people in usa ate fast food from 2003 to 2013.

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The bar chart provides information about how often people in usa ate fast food from 2003 to 2013.
The bar chart illustrates the frequency of individuals eating fast food in the USA over a ten-year period. The data is measured in percentage of people.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the figure for people who ate fast food once a
week
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 in the middle of the period stood as the highest percentage among the five categories (once a
week
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, once or twice a month, several
times
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 a
week
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, a few
times
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 a year, never, and every day). Meanwhile, that for people who consumed it every day held the lowest figure given by the diagram. In 2003, the proportion for once a
week
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 stood as the highest ratio, at approximately 32%, followed by once or twice a month, which accounted for 30%,
while
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 the remaining categories (several
times
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 a
week
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, a few
times
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 a year, never, and every day) held at only below 20%. In 2013, we can see that the ratio for once a
week
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 decreased to roughly 28%,
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 that for once or twice a month rose to around 38%.
Furthermore
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, the proportion for a few
times
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 a year inclined to 15%,
while
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 the remaining categories fell
down and stood at
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 below 18%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words week, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • the bar chart shows
  • provides information about
  • how often people ate fast food
  • the percentage of people
  • in the USA
  • in 2003, 2006, and 2013
  • the most common habit
  • the largest group
  • once a week
  • once or twice a month
  • several times a week
  • once or twice a year
  • a small percentage
  • a very small number
  • rose slightly
  • fell a little
  • stayed almost the same
  • changed over time
  • was higher than
  • was lower than
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