The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram depicts the production of

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from

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canes

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, the whole process consists of seven steps, from cultivating

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cane plants to drying and cooling

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sugar

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crystals.

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,

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canes are planted

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it takes around 12-18 months until they are fully grown. Afterwards, they are harvested in two different ways. One method is to cut them down by using large trucks. Another way is that they are cut manually by farmers.

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, they are placed in a machine where they are crushed to extract the juice. Afterwards, the juice is purified by using a limestone filter.

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the purified juice is heated in an evaporator until it becomes

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syrup. In order to separate

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crystals from the syrup, the mixture is

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processed in a centrifuge.

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, the resulting

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crystals are dried and cooled. The whole process of

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production is completed.