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The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.

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The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.
The maps illustrate the
changes
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 that took
placde
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place
 in a school between 2004 and 2024.
This
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 report aims to summarise the key trends,significant comparisons and notable
changes
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 highlighted in the data.
Overall
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,the
area
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 underwent several significant
changes
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.Some existing
feature
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features
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 were removed or replaced,
while
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 new facilities were added.
In
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addition
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addition,
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 the layout of the
area
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become
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has become
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 more modern. Looking first at the northern part of the
area
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,the sports field was located there in 2004.
However
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,it was converted into a school building in 2024.Meanwhile,the main entrance
remaind
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remained
 in the same location,
although
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 the path was reduced. Moving to the opposite part of the
area
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,the road was added.
Furthermore
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,the tress was added in the eastern part of the
area
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.Another noticeable
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changes
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change
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 was that the car park was built in the north.
Overall
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,these
changes
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 made the
area
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 more developed.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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