Some Cities have vehicle free days when private cars, trucks, and motorcycles are banned from the city center. Public transportation likes buses, taxis, and metros are advised. To what extent do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

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one is

interisting

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interesting

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from

vehicle free

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vehicle-free

days is from

economics

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the economic

sector, back in my country

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policy

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a huge market. Not only

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around the city, but

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try some local food even bought some of souvenir.

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really

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helpfull

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helps

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people's

activity, some countries celebrate

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vehicle-free

days on weekends and

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national

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people have

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as work, or just have some

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stuck or

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destination, it will cost their times.

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task response

Answer the main question more clearly. Say if the good points are greater than the bad points, and keep this view from the start to the end.

task response

Develop each main point. For example, explain how car-free days help local shops, food sellers, and tourists. Then explain why travel problems may affect workers or people with plans.

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Your last sentence is not clear enough. Give a direct final view, such as: car-free days should be kept because the gains for health, air, and local business are greater than the travel problems.

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Add other important ideas about this policy, such as less air pollution, less noise, and safer streets. These points will make your answer more complete.

coherence and cohesion

Use a clear four-part plan: an opening with your view, one paragraph on good points, one paragraph on bad points, and a final answer.

coherence and cohesion

Make each paragraph about one main idea. The first paragraph can focus on local business, while the next can focus on delays and blocked roads.

coherence and cohesion

Use simple linking words to show the flow of ideas: First, Also, However, For example, As a result, and In the end.

coherence and cohesion

Some sentences are hard to follow because there are many ideas in one sentence. Write shorter sentences and state who is affected and why.

task response

You give both good and bad points about car-free days. This shows that you understand the two sides of the topic.

task response

The example about local food and souvenir shops is useful and related to the topic.

coherence and cohesion

You use words such as “but”, “however”, and “on the other hand” to connect opposite ideas.

coherence and cohesion

Your writing has a clear move from good points to bad points, followed by a final thought.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

154 words

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