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The graph below describes the use of fixed telephone lines, mobile phones, and internet between 1994 and 2005 in China.

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The graph below describes the use of fixed telephone lines, mobile phones, and internet between 1994 and 2005 in China.
The line chart presents information on the number of users of three communication technologies in China—fixed telephone lines, mobile phones, and the Internet—from 1994 to 2005.
Overall
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mobile-phone
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mobile phone
 use increased rapidly and became the dominant category by the end of the period. The number of fixed telephone lines
also
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 grew steadily,
while
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 Internet use declined over the years.
According to
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 the chart,
mobile-phone
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mobile phone
 users increased from 1994 to approximately 450 million in 2005. Mobile phones were more convenient and accessible than fixed telephone lines, which remained more commonly used by older people. Internet use
also
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 changed during
this
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 period, reaching nearly 250 million users in 2005, possibly because alternative communication technologies had become more widely available.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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