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The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart and data
illustrates
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illustrate
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 the results of
a
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apply
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research
of
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on
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 library users at a college.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
,
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full time
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full-time
 undergraduate has accessed
library
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the library
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 highly,
while
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,
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apply
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 less interest
shown
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is shown
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 by academic staff.
On the other hand
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,
statisfaction
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satisfaction
 was shown considerably in helping nature of staff and dissatisfaction
in
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with
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 internet power/speed. After analysing the information, it is abundantly clear that
,
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 ongoing graduate
student
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students
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 have
trend
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a trend
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 to use
library
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the library
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 with 44% whic is covered almost half
area
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of the area
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 of the chart.
Whereas
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, postgraduate and
part time
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part-time
 graduate students spend
there
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their
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 time with 25% and 16%, respectively.
In addition
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,
distance
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the distance
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 learning
rate
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 shows 8%.
Although
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,
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apply
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 academic
tutor
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tutors
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 have
least
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the least
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 interest with 7%. On top of that,
satisfaction
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the satisfaction
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rate
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mostly
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is mostly
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 seen in helpful staff with 95%
rate
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.
However
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, opening hours followed the second lead with 65%. Apart from that,
availability
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the availability
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 of books and journals have 50% and 45% satisfaction
rate
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, respectively. Since
,
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 the lowest
rate
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 was shown in wifi reliability with 48%.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • library users
  • survey results
  • the chart shows
  • the table gives
  • the largest group
  • the smallest group
  • a high number
  • a low number
  • more than
  • less than
  • about the same
  • in general
  • overall
  • by contrast
  • while
  • compared with
  • positive view
  • negative view
  • service quality
  • study space
  • opening hours
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