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the line graph shows the amount of fastfood consumed by astrutalian teeagaer from 1975 to 2000

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the line graph shows the amount of fastfood consumed by astrutalian teeagaer from 1975 to 2000
The given line graph illustrates the quantity of
Pizza
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,
fish
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,
chips
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 and
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hamerburgers
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hamburgers
 consumption between1975 to 2000 among
Australian
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the Australian
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 younger generation.
Overall
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,
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hamburgers
hamerburgers
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 and
pizza
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 are
favourite
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the favourite
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fastfood
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fast foods
 of Aussie teenagers
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while
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, while
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 there is a downward trend in the eating of
fish
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 and
chips
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 by
younger
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the younger
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 generation. In detail,
fish
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 and
chips
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was
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were
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 taken by children in 1975 was
approxiametly
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approximately
 100
as
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, as
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 the figure
decrease
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decreased
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 slightly in 1980 about to 81
times
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. There is a
slightly
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slight
 increase
of
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in
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fish
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 and
chips
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 in 1985 around
to
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apply
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88
times
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.
However
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,
fish
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 and
chips
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 become least popular food items in the coming years and hit a low point just about 39
times
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 in 2000. As for more,
pizza
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 and
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hamerburgers
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hamburgers
 intake was 10
times
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 in
1965
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1965,
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 as the figure continued to grow significantly in1985 was around 40
times
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 and 20
times
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.
Moreover
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,
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hamerburgers utilization
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hamburgers utilisation
 was
highest
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higher
 than
pizza
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 in
1985
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1985,
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 exactly at 82
times
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as
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, as
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 the
pizza
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 party
grow
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grew
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 gradually.
Therefore
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,
pizza
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 intake was 60
times
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in 1990 lower
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lower in 1990
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 than
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hamerburgers
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hamburgers
.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, fish, chips, hamerburgers, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast-food consumption
  • Australian teenagers
  • number of times eaten per year
  • over the 25-year period
  • an upward trend
  • a downward trend
  • rise sharply
  • increase steadily
  • grow in popularity
  • decline gradually
  • fall dramatically
  • fluctuate slightly
  • remain relatively stable
  • overtake fish and chips
  • the most popular choice
  • the least popular item
  • reach a peak
  • end the period at
  • in contrast
  • overall trend
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