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The chart below shows the number of men and women (in thousand) in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.

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The chart below shows the number of men and women (in thousand) in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
The bar chart shows how many
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 and
women
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 studied full-time and part-time in
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 education in Britain in 1970/71, 1980/81 and 1990/91.
Overall
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, part-time
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 were much more numerous than full-time
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 for both
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 and
women
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 in all three periods. The number of full-time
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 rose for both groups, and by the end,
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 had more part-time
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 than
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. For
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, about 1 million studied part-time in 1970/71, and only about 120,000 studied full-time. The part-time
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 fell to about 870,000 in 1980/81, and
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 it rose slightly to about 910,000 in 1990/91.
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, the full-time
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 grew steadily from about 120,000 to about 250,000. For
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, the part-time
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 climbed from about 750,000 in 1970/71 to about 830,000 in 1980/81, and
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 to about 1.1 million in 1990/91.
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 was the biggest rise in the chart. Full-time
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students
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also
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 increased, from about 70,000 to about 230,000 in 1980/81 and to about 260,000 in 1990/91. So,
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 had the highest part-time
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at the end
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