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The charts below give information about players of electronic games in South Korea in 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below give information about players of electronic games in South Korea in 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs illustrate the percentages of electronic gamers in South Korea in 2003, divided into 3 different pie
chart
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charts
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 for 3 topics, player’s age, gender
and
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kind
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the kind
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 of game
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then
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they
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 tend to choose.
Overall
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, a predominant number of players are under 18 years old, nearly three-fourths are male gamers, and the most popular game genre is action. Taking a quick look at the two graphs
on
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 the top row. The age of player chart was divided into 3
areas
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, with the least number of players above 36 years old,
it
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 is only a quarter. The other 2
areas
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 are under 18 and from 18 to 36
,
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 both
areas
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 were equal, with each around 37-38
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percent
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per cent
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. Looking at the other picture of gamers’ gender, it was largely men, who dominate up to 72
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percent
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per cent
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, leaving women
zone
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at
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 just over a quarter. The largest chart on the bottom row is the types of games that are played most, they are divided into 6
areas
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, with action and sport
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 the most, they were 43% and 20%, respectively. The next number is the racing genre, which is 17
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percent
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per cent
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. The other 21
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percent
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per cent
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 is split into 3 equal parts, with 7
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percent
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 each
, they are
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 education, role-playing, and other genres

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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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