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The map shows the present layout of an post building and plans for its future redevelopment.

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The map shows the present layout of an post building and plans for its future redevelopment.
The
two
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 maps illustrate how the post building looks now and its
furute redevelopent
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future redevelopment
 plan.
Overall
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, the most significant changes were the replacement of
entrance
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the entrance
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 and the grass areas were repurposed for seating and meeting zones. In
present
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the present
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layout
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layout,
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 the main entrance is located
in
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at
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 the eastern bottom of the plan, directly leading to
WCs
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the WCs
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.
In addition
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, there
is
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are
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two
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 large grass areas on either
left
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the left
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 and right parts of the building.
Moreover
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, there are several distinctive sections for
kitchen
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the kitchen
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, canteen, and storeroom at the upper side of the layout,
while
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 at the
bottom
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bottom,
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 there are four rooms designed for
office
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the office
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. In the future office building
one
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, one
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 change that stands out is the entry point, which is relocated to the middle point.
Two
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 green spaces
were
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apply
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experienced major renovations, one
in
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on
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 the east side was converted into
meeting
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a meeting
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 area with several chairs, including
coffee
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a coffee
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 machine and WCs in the upper corner. Meanwhile, the second one
in
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on
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 the west side was repurposed into
outdoor
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an outdoor
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 seating area. The initial catering areas were replaced
to
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with
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 offices,
whereas
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 the storeroom remained unchanged.
In contrast
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, four former office rooms were merged to create
two
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seperate
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separate
 larger sections.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • map
  • present
  • future
  • plan
  • building
  • post office
  • area
  • space
  • room
  • entrance
  • exit
  • door
  • window
  • car park
  • parking
  • yard
  • road
  • path
  • sign
  • counter
  • desk
  • staff
  • customer
  • service
  • work
  • time
  • crowd
  • line
  • bigger
  • new
  • old
  • safe
  • easy
  • clear
  • open
  • bright
  • design
  • build
  • change
  • improve
  • add
  • extend
  • phase
  • cost
  • traffic
  • noise
  • safety
  • access
  • people
  • move
  • area
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