The graph belows show the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, train or bus between 1970 and 2030.

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The line chart below shows the average

number

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of UK

commuters

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travelling each day by car, train, or

bus

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, from 1970 to 2030.

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, the

number

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commuters

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travelling in

trine

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trains

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and

car

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cars

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had the highest

number

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and

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while

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illustrate is

bus

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had the lowest

number

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. For the more From 1970 to 2027 trine and car

which

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commuters, which

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are

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the most popular,

remined

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remained

consisten

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consistently

increase from 1.75

million

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5milion

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5 million

, to 4.5

million

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and 8

million

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commuters travelling

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apply

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respectively.

however

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this

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is forcost to rise by 2030.

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commuters

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travelling with

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bus

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buses,

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which

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has

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the lowest average, from 1970 to 2027

bus

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had reached roughly 4

milion

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million

, and 3

million

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apply

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commuters

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travelling, and are expected to decrease by 2030.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

120 words

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The graph belows show the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, train or bus between 1970 and 2030.

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