The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The illustration outlines how

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is produced from the initial stage

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the

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cane.

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, it is crystal clear that the process encompasses five stages, starting with

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the harvesting

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of

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cane, ending with

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the separation

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of crystals. In the initial stage,

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canes grow within 12 to 18 months. The next step includes them

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getting harvested either by tractor or by workers. Gathered plants go through a process called crushing, in which solid material

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into juice. Once

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has been completed,

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liquid is delivered to the limestone filter, where it

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to an extraction, and becomes purifying juice.

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, the heat is given to boil the juice

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which it evaporates in order to become a syrup. In the final stage, once

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crystals get isolated from the syrup, it is left to dehydrate and allowed to solidify.

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, the procedure ultimately culminates in the formation of

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.