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The graph below shows the number of academic articles published on five different psychological topics between 1980 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph provides key
informatio
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information
 about the number of academic articles that
published
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 on selected
various
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psychological topics from 1980 to 2020. The units are measured
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in thousands.
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, it is clear from the figure that the
phsychoanalysis
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psychoanalysis
 topic was in
declining
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 state over the period.
In addition
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, Neuropsychology and cognitive behavioural
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therapy
 are the highest,
whereas
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,
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 mindfulness, positive psychology, and
phsychoanalysis
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psychoanalysis
 are the
loweast
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lowest
 numbers.
According to
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 what is shown, from 1980 to 2000, cognitive behavioural
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therapy
 and Neuropsychology had a gradual
increasing
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increase of
 approximately in 20 value.
Moreover
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, between 2000 and 2020, both had sharply
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.
Whereas
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, over the period between 1980 and 2020, the
phsychoanalysis
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psychoanalysis
 had been steadily
decreased
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decreasing
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, dropping from nearly 30 to 19. In terms of
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mindfulness
,
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and
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 positive psychology. From 1980 to 1990,
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there were
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 around 0,
while
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 in 2000, both had slightly increased.
Furthermore
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,
since
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from
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 2010 to 2020, positive psychology and mindfulness
had
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 been increasing dramatically.

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