The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the

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of making smoked

fish

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, showing the different stages involved in the

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.

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, it highlights the step-by-step transformation involved from the initial phase to the final outcome.

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, the

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consists of twelve main stages, beginning with

huntering

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hunting

fish

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from the river and ending with selling the

fish

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at

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fish

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the fish

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shop. It is a cyclical

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,

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apply

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in which the

fish

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go through several stages before

the

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they

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fish

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are ready to be sold.

At the first stage

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in the

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, the

fish

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are hunted from

river

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the river

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.

Following

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this

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, the

fish

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are transported to the port. The

fish

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are

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frozen

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before being thrown into fresh water to be cleaned. After that, the

fish

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are

cutted

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open. Once

this

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stage has been completed, the

fish

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are washed

by

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salt water and yellow

colore

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colouring

. In the following stage, the

fish

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are put into the machine to smoke.

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, the

fish

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are packed in boxes, after which the boxes are frozen

in

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at

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0 degrees.

the

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fish

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are transported to the cold store. The

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then

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continues with distributing the boxes to the

fishshops

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fish shops

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Finally

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, the

fish

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are ready to be sold,

thus

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completing the

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.