The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

The two diagrams show the first

establishement

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establishment

of the Grange

Park

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in 1920 and how it looks presently.

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, it can be seen that the

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has gone through multiple

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alterations

, the major transformation is replacing the fountain located in the

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of the

park

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with a rose garden ; another noticeable difference is the upgrade of the stage for musicians and building an

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for concerts.

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elimination of the chairs and the glass house

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adding the water

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. The whole infrastructure of the

park

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has been modified and enhanced with amenities that serve todays needs

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as the underground car parking area ,and the children's play areas which were once a pond for water plants , in addission to the cafe where people can sit and relax

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their children can enjoy playing right next to

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, the only thing that stayed the same over all these years is the entrance of the

park

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