The table below gives information about the changes in most travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

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The table below gives information about the changes in most travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
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The table provides information about the changes in the type of travelling for England in 1985 and 2000.
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, the car recorded the highest values both times,
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the taxi generally had the lowest. The most noticeable difference was in long-distance buses and in the total amount of travel through the period. In terms of 1985, cars recorded over 3199 points, compared with 13 for taxis.
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, other types of travelling had a figure of 450, making it the second-highest category. The total number of models of travelling is 4740. Turning to 2000, Car remained its highest category and had risen
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to 4806,
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taxi recorded only 42. A similar pattern can be seen in
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,which followed the uptrend from 289 to 366.
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bicycles and local buses have fallen by 18 and 155 positions ,
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walking remained relatively unchanged. Talking about all categories, their number rose to 6475 , which is 1735 higher than
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