The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate the changes that

take

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have taken

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place in the

town

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name

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Westley in 1985 and now.

Overall

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town

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the town

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had

been change

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changed

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massively. Mainly

new

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, new

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rail

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railroads

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road

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were added to the place

and

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, and

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forest that

placed

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were placed

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inside the

town

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were completely

take

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taken

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out.

Also

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, many of the old buildings were

also

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turened

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turned

demolishd

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demolished

into different sections in precent day map. Westley

town

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boardes to the River

twine

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Tine

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from the West, Tinton village from the North and Lake Lenbon from the East side of the

town

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. But Southern borders were extended upto Shoping

center

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and residential area

along with

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the bushes by removing the fields.

Also

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Mainly

this

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town

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were got railway station that palced in the extended area.

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This

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These

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rail tracks

were runs

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run

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towards London by passing

river

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the river

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from the bridge that people used

but

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, but

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now

this

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only

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reserved only for rails. Previously, from the north side of the

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road

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road,

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there was

house

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a house

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of Lord Westley's

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. This

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this

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place

were

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was

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removed from the map and

built two new structures

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two new structures were built

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for red lion and

Lenton

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the Lenton

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Hotel.

While

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near the

road

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that connects to the

bridge

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bridge,

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were now built Sports

center

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and

museum

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a museum

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by removing the coach inn.

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Also

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Also,

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old

Church

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churches

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were removed and

construct

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new shoping

center

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name west gate.

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Also

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Also,

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add

new

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a new

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tree way

road

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by crossing the

road

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near that

shoping

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shopping centre

center

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Finally

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old Market

squar

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Square

and

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town hall reamin

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Town Hall remain

the same.

Nevertheless

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new

Cinama

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cinema

added

oppersit

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opposite

to the new railway

satation

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station

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road, center with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
36
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

244 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential area
amenities
thoroughfare
connectivity
industrial development
factory
public amenities
recreational facilities
educational facilities
residential expansion
apartment blocks
commercial activity
shopping centers
restaurants
single-family homes
development
open field
noticeable change
replacing
establishment

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The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Too much emphasis is given for education of the young children. Moregovernment money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?