The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the type of individuals who use a
library
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based on a survey they undertook,
while
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the table shows the rates of satisfaction these individuals indicate.
Overall
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, most of the
library
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's users are full-time undergraduates, and the least were the academic
staff
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.
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, almost all users were very satisfied with the helpfulness of the
library
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's
staff
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. 44% of the
library
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's users were full-time undergraduates, which is the largest group among others. Postgraduates held the second place with a total 41%, 25% full-time, and 16% part-time. Meanwhile, distance learner accounts for only 8%, surpassing the academic
staff
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by 1%.
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, all visitors were satisfied with
opening
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the opening
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hours and helpfulness of the
library
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's
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staff
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staff,
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that 95% of those who undertook the survey were very satisfied with
.
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it.
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20% were not satisfied with the availability of journals, which is double the rate of those who were not happy with the availability of books, and just 1% higher than
others
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those
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who are not satisfied with the reliability of wi-fi.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, staff with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • library users
  • survey results
  • the chart shows
  • the table gives
  • the largest group
  • the smallest group
  • a high number
  • a low number
  • more than
  • less than
  • about the same
  • in general
  • overall
  • by contrast
  • while
  • compared with
  • positive view
  • negative view
  • service quality
  • study space
  • opening hours
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