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the two charts below show the percrntage of mothers and fathers in part-time and full-time employment between 1997 and 2017.

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the two charts below show the percrntage of mothers and fathers in part-time and full-time employment between 1997 and 2017.
the two line
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The two-line
 graph and bar chart illustrate the
percentage
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 of
mothers
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 and
fathers
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 in part-time and full-time
job
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jobs
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 during 1997 and 2017.
Overall
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,
fathers
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 were far more likely than
mothers
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 to work full-time throughout the period,
while
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 part-time employment was much more common among
mothers
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.
In addition
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, the proportion of
mothers
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 in full-time work increased gradually,
whereas
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 the employment patterns among
fathers
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 changed only slightly. During the period, the
percentage
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 of
fathers
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 with a youngest child aged three or four years old, who work full-time were approximately 90%.
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 there were some
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 during 2004 and 2015, the
percentage
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 of full-time working
fathers
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 was 90%.
However
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, the proportion of
fathers
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 with part-time
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jobs
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 showed a slight
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time from around 0.3% in 1997 to nearly 0.9% in 2017.
In contrast
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, the
percentage
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 of full-time working
mothers
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 with a youngest child aged three or four years was over 15% in 1998.
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 increased to around 25% in 2016.
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, the proportion of
mothers
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 working part-time
were
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 below 40% in 1998, with a decrease of approximately 35% in 2011. The data showed that the
percentage
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 of part-time employed
mothers
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 decreased steadily to about 38% in 2016.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, mothers, fathers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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