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The table below gives information on the salaries of secondary teachers in five countries in 2009

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The table below gives information on the salaries of secondary teachers in five countries in 2009
The table compares the
salaries
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 of secondary and high school
teachers
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 from five different
countries
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 in 2009,
as well as
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 the number of
years
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 needed to reach the maximum pay.
Overall
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,
teachers
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 in Luxembourg earned the highest
salaries
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 at all stages
but
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teachers
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 in Australia and Denmark reached their top
salaries
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 much faster than those in the other three
countries
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. In Luxembourg,
teachers
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 started at 80,000
which
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 was much higher than in any other
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countries
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country
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. Their pay increased to 119,000 after 15
years
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 and reached a maximum of 132,000 after 30
years
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. Meanwhile, starting
salaries
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 were 45,000 in Denmark and only 28,000 in Australia.
Teachers
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 in these
countries
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 reached their highest pay in just 8 and 9
years
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, so their
salaries
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 after 15
years
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 stayed the same at 54,000 and 48,000. For the two Asian
countries
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, starting pay was relatively low, at 34,000 in Japan and 30,000 in Korea. After 15
years
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,
salaries
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 reached 65,000 in Japan and 48,000 in Korea.
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, Japanese
teachers
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 reached a maximum of 86,000 after 37
years
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,
while
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 Korean
teachers
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 reached 62,000 after 34
years
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.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, teachers, countries, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 7 times.
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