A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.

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Animals

are an integral part of

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cosystem.It has become a debatable issue regarding the exploitation of

animalsby

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animals by

animals

mankind.Some people opine that

animals

should be treated the same way as

humans

are and have equal rights as

humans

while others think that they should be used as a source of food or medical

research

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essay will discuss both sides of the argument. With regard to

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xploitation of

animals

,people believe that it is acceptable for several

reasonsFirstly

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reasons firstly

humans

are considered to be the most prime being on

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lanet and everything is done to ensure human survival.If it means experimentation on

animals

to fight and find

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ure against disease or to

fulfill

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other demands.

Then

this

takes priority over animal suffering.

Furthermore

,it is believed by some that

animals

do not feel pain or loss the same way as

humans

do,so if they have to be killed for medical

research

and

other purpose

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then

it is morally acceptable.

However

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do not believe that these

argument

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stand up to scrutiny.

To begin

with,it has been shown on several occasions by secret filming in laboratories by animal rights groups that animal feel as much pain as

humans

do and they

also

suffer if kept for long periods in cages.

In addition

,a substantial amount of

research

has been done on

animals

for cosmetic products,not for finding cures which

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unnecessary.

Moreover

humans

can get all the required nutrients

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orm green vegetables and fruits.

Therefore

again,having to kill

animals

for food is not

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dequate argument. Summing up,it can not be denied that

animals

are required for

research

and other purposes but it should

be keep

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in mind that they should not be capitalized on just for the sake of human needs and appropriate steps must be taken to improve the rights of

animals

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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