Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with food and education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience

Nowadays poor
nations
need
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upport of the
well developed
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countries
,
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so that
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overnment of poor
countries
can provide all the basic necessities of the lives to their citizens. In poor
countries
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the most basic issues are poverty, nutrition, uneducated people, unemployment and commerce. I totally in
favor
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of
this
topic and will share my views about it. Richest
countries
are strong enough to provide the basic
facilities
to the poor
nations
.
For example
, Africa is one of the developing
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, the people of that
country
don’t have proper health
facilities
, employment and trade. The government of that
country
seek help from
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ichest
country
and due to
this
that nation has improved now.
Although
, there
is
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not good health
facilities
are available, unemployment and poverty
is
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even present but it has been changed a lot if we compare it with
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ast.
Furthermore
, richest
countries
provide loans to
that
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poor
countries
if needed; so the government can plan new strategies
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how to improve their
country
’s economy.
Moreover
, it is very important for a
country
who borrow a sum of money from
a
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richest
countries
they should have to return it on time because
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they will gain trust from them and if any problem will initiate they will be always there to help. In my opinion, if
r
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ichest
countries
are providing support to the poor
nations
,
then
it is a very big opportunity for
that
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those
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nations
to improve their economy and provide better
facilities
to their citizens
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