Inventors are not as important to society as doctors. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, we can see science everywhere around us. New

inventions

make the

lives

of

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people

easier. On

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ther hand

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doctors

are really important persons for us.

Doctors

are the person who

help

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us to get well when we become sick. They save our

lives

. In my opinion,

inventions

and

doctors

are incomparable both have different roles in our

lives

.

Lots

of

inventions

have become

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ery important part of our

lives

.

For example

,

aero planes

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aeroplanes

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by which we can travel and reach to other countries earlier as compare to

another

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means of transportation. Computers

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are the most amazing invention. We are totally now become dependent on computers, it has

lots

of benefits and is useful in many ways. In offices, shopping malls, schools and homes,

people

use computers to save

lots

of data, documents, calculations and doing assignments.

Furthermore

,

smart phones

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are

also

one of the most important

inventions

for peoples.

People

found it more convenient for them in carrying as well as

lots

of applications are available due to which they can contact

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their family, relatives and friends.

Moreover

, there are

lots

of things that are invented by inventors that had made

house work

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also

easy

for example

, home appliances, washing machines, refrigerators etc. On

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ther hand

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doctors

are most knowledgeable persons that can treat different diseases.

Doctors

study a lot and always want to get rid of illness from a patient. If there will be no

doctors

then

nobody can protect the sick

people

and

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ortality rate increase extremely. There are

lots

of procedures

also

done to protect

the

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lives

.

Doctors

perform different screening and diagnose

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isease properly. In conclusion, both have different roles and values in our

lives

, without doctor’s human beings cannot survive

healthy

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or we can say that no one can be there to protect from illnesses. Obviously, without inventors

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new

inventions

cannot take place and there would be no new unique discovery

people

would be able to see.