Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Even in developed

countries

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a degree of

poverty

exists.

However

, in many developing

countries

poverty

is a major problem, and the number of poor

people

continues to increase. There are various factors that cause

poverty

and these need to be addressed.' The

first

factor influencing

world

poverty

is the current global economic

system

.

This

system

reinforces inequality between rich and poor

people

since it allows resources to be distributed unequally amongst

people

.

In addition

, the global economic

system

can favour the investment strategies of large transna­tional corporations, which often pay their

workers

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sub-standard wages. Another reason for

world

poverty

is illiteracy. Many

people

around the

world

do not have access to

education

, and

as a result

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do not learn to read or write. They are,

therefore

, precluded from well-paid employment and so can not improve their living conditions. In order to provide help for the

world

's poor these problems need to be addressed.

Firstly

, the interna­tional community has to establish a fairer economic

system

in which the wealth of each country can be shared equitably amongst its

people

.

Moreover

, all

countries

around the

world

should make it a priority to eradicate illiteracy by providing

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omprehensive

education

for all citizens so that everyone is equally capable of improving their living standards via access to

education

. To conclude, it can be said that

poverty

will probably always exist.

Nevertheless

,

countries

around the

world

can take actions to reduce

poverty

by ensuring that there is a fair distribution of wealth amongst

people

, and by making sure that all

people

have access to

education

.