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Modern technology, such as personal computers and the internet, has made it possible for many people to work from their home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

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atest technology enabled them to do so. Despite the apparent drawbacks of
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 challenges. There are two fundamental disadvantages of
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communication with their colleagues. Unless they can secure a high-speed networking solution at their places, the productivity of them and their teams will be suffered. Another difficulty is the lack of face-to-face interactions between coworkers when
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 from external locations might feel less connected to their team.
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, these issues can be addressed by investing in high-speed internet data plans at
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relationships.
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, enabling employees to
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 from anywhere will bring an array of benefits to both employers and their workers.
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, the possibility to
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 enables parents to keep their jobs while taking care of their young children.
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, young mothers might have to quit their job to do housework, resulting in an impact
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 the workforce.
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,
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 of commuting for hours to get to
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 in large cities,
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 who live far from their offices can avoid transit time by working from
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, companies’ owners will save significant costs when they support that model of
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people
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 in the offices leads to smaller office spaces and lower operating costs. In conclusion, though working from
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 more significant.
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