It is better to save money than to spend it. How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving money more important than spending in today’s world? Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Saving

money

or spending

money

this

current

economical

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climate poses a dividing question. In

this

essay, I agree that in

this

modern world it is important to save

money

for

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umber of reasons, namely for emergency funds and

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many it’s a privilege

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spending

money

. On the one hand, spending

money

in various ways,

such

as going on vacations and shopping gives

people

a certain rush of happiness

that is

very much needed today.

People

are overworked, exhausted and unhappy;

thus

, focusing on saving

money

would rob them of a better tomorrow.

Moreover

, sometimes saving

money

is not always a choice one has

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control over,

such

as buying food, investing in housing and spending

money

on transportation, these are all items and situations where

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oney is needed to be spent and it does not allow room for one to save

money

as the remaining amount from their salary might not be great.

On the other hand

, live altering situations call for a need to save

money

. In certain places, like the United States of America where healthcare is priced like a luxury, it is very crucial for

people

to save

money

in order to afford taking care of their health and

paying

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for their prescriptions.

Conversely

, as I have mentioned above,

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ost of living has increased significantly and reached a point where

people

are unable to afford

housing

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and buying a car.

Therefore

, it is important to have enough

money

saved to survive in today’s world and to prevent economic anxiety.

In addition

, a vast majority of today’s

people

are either in the working class or financially underprivileged;

thus

, spending

money

is not an option for them and saving

money

is defiantly on the top of their priority list. Overall, based on the majority of

people

’s economic standing, saving

money

is very crucial to

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survival and is a priority, as

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without it, it would lead

people

to turn to loans from banks with high interest or even being on the verge of bankruptcy. I agree that it’s key to save

money

rather than to spend it in

this

modern world.

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It is better to save money than to spend it. How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving money more important than spending in today’s world? Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people think that the government should spend more money on public services rather than wasting money on the arts. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views give opinions.

It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays more and more business meetings and business training are taking place online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people feel that children should be educated in single sex schools; others argue that mixed schools are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays more and more business meetings and business training are taking place online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?