Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

People

believe that the expenditure of

art

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overnment is unnecessary and some other sector deserves

this

money more. In my opinion, I completely disagree with

this

statement.

Firstly

, are is a form which represents culture, human emotion and largely, humanity. From stoneage,

people

are engaging themselves on

art

. It does not only give

people

visual pleasure but

also

gives their heart peace. Many

people

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that they managed inspiration or reason

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living even the meaning of life through

art

.

On the other hand

, some

people

may think that

art

has no productivity so that the money should be invested

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some industries or factories.

However

, a good painting may not help a nation economically much, but it can make us feel human. To give a clear example, a painting on poor

people

can melt

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heart and inspire us to help them.

This

type of emotions are created by

art

and these emotions

represents

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humanity. In my opinion,

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overnment should

spent

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money on

art

as much as required. Despite

of

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having a practical life, dealing with materialistic staff,

people

have to go back to the fundamental reason

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living which is happiness. So, if

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overnment stop funding on

art

, many

artist

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would be forced to stop painting and

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ation would lose many talents and inspirational paintings. In conclusion, I would recommend the expenditure on

art

as necessary.

In addition

,

this

expenditure is not any sense of wastage,

this

is necessary for humankind.