What are the advantages of maternity leave? Which side for you feel outweighs the other.

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old age. The owner of the
organization
is now aware that to
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usiness smoothly, skilled people are the
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ong term commitment. To
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conquer
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, nowadays, companies are offering a number of
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benefits
to their employees
such
as paid leaves in the pregnancy emergency. I honestly feel
this
is the best way to encourage lady skilled workers to
work
for any
organization
. At cons side, while working in the pregnancy
time
, the employee can not perform well compared to the normal days. During the maternity, girls are facing more physical pain and they require to be more
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conscious
about their child at the
time
of handling
work
pressure which will result
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ow performance of
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, in many countries, now, it is a law to provide maternity leave to girls and can not ask to leave the job in
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particular days. In
this
situation, to fill the human power needs companies are now hiring employees on the contract basis which causes extra financial loss to the
organization
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another side, There are several
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benefits
to the company, staff and to the society itself. If the
organization
thinks about workers and provide them
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help in the form of leaves,
then
workers will
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ompany and continuing their service to the firm for
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time
. Long term commitment of employees is a great
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beneficial
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iring process. The organisation can save their
time
and hiring resources. To conclude
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, it is firmly clear that to grow business one needs skill candidates who can
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ong
time
and effectively. The
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leaves and other necessary
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