Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It
is often been argued
Suggestion
has often been argued
is often being argued
that the best way to get a
job
is to complete
university
education.
However
, some people argue that
it
it is
it's
better to work and gain enough experience. While it can save money and time
,
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,
in my opinion, it helps a
person
to earn
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earn
more salary and a better
job
prospect. On the one hand, one of the primary objectives of
university
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the university
a university
is to help students find better
job
opportunities. Institutions are hoping that the curriculum, projects and course modules may help and guide the students in the work place.
Besides
, universities are the best place to learn about team building aspects by playing
team sport
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team sports
a team sport
or team activities. So, these students develop a valuable set of skills
such
as interacting and cooperating with others.
This
, in turn, will either benefit them in the workplace or in the social life.
Moreover
, it is mandatory to have a
university
degree
to get the
job
in multi-national companies and earn a sizeable salary. A recent survey published by Queensland
University which
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University, which
was conducted across the US in Fortune500 companies showed that more than 80% of the high-ranking employees at least had a Master's
degree
.
Thus
, making
university
education more important in personal growth in the company.
On the other hand
, practical life experience can be an excellent teacher.
For example
, a marketing sales
person
can sell any product by
conviencing
causing one to believe the truth of something
convincing
the opposite
person
and
this
skill does not require any classroom training.
because
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Because
a
person
can develop
this
skill only by going
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
the world and having a face to face conversation. So, if an individual is good at words, it will be easy for
his
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him
to secure the
job
and need not go through the hassle of studying for a
degree
.
Thus
,
this
approach saves not only money buts
also
time and energy.
Moreover
, some companies choose their tenured executives as middle-level and above mid-level managers because they feel that they have better knowledge about the company and its products rather than hiring a
university
graduate and training them from the scratch.
However
, most of the senior and high-level jobs
such
as CEO, COO, CFO, General Manager and so on are only offered to people who are educated and graduated from the universities. To conclude,
although
working directly can help a
person
achieve
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more
-range jobs, I believe that a
university
degree
is one of the essential
factor
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factors
in order to obtain high positions in the company.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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