Some people think that all children should learn geography in school. However… October 30, 2018 By bw However…some others think that it is more important to learn subjects that are more relevant to life. What is your opinion?

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It is true that studying

Geography

in school is important. I agree partially with

this

opinion and

also

supports that studying other important subjects like Science, Mathematics,

Tecnology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

Technology

and English are

also

most vital

Suggestion

more vital

than studying

Geography

only, especially STEM subjects.

To begin

with, by studying

Geography

, one can acquire

knowledge

about the Earth, the Oceans and the mountains and their range in different countries of the world. But

on the other hand

, in

this

era of information technology all the above mentioned information and maps and current weather reports are available

instaneously

on personal computers, smart phones, via Google search engine. Even uneducated

also

able to understand it

thouroughly

in an exhaustive manner

thoroughly

Hence

studying

Geography

in depth is not essential at higher education or primary education levels.

However basic

Accept comma addition

However, basic

knowledge

Geography

in essential for every student.

On the contrary

, familiarity or

knowledge

in other life essential or science subjects like STEM-Science, Techonology, English and Mathematics are highly desirable in

this

current age of neck throat competition to get a job in

market

Suggestion

the market

a market

in order to survive.

For example

, in a survey conducted by British primary and higher education council,

few years

Suggestion

a few years

ago 90

Accept comma addition

ago, 90

% of pupils have chosen STEM subjects after their graduation compared to Social sciences and Arts. Not only for job purpose, Science gives valuable

knowledge

in day to day needs and at times saves the life of fellow passengers in the form of

first

aid

for instance

in a road traffic

accidents

Suggestion

accident

or plain crashes.

In addition

, being expert in English language, one can manage in all over the world, even without

further

gross

knowledge

in other subjects as people will be impressed by language skills and respond to help us. To conclude, choosing only

Geography

and devoting all time on it is not much productive, in comparison to STEM subjects in terms of future job and learning life skills.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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311 words

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