Some people think that all children should learn geography in school. However… October 30, 2018 By bw However…some others think that it is more important to learn subjects that are more relevant to life. What is your opinion?

It is true that studying
Geography
in school is important. I agree partially with
this
opinion and
also
supports that studying other important subjects like Science, Mathematics,
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
Technology
Tecnology
and English are
also
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more vital
most vital
than studying
Geography
only, especially STEM subjects.
To begin
with, by studying
Geography
, one can acquire
knowledge
about the Earth, the Oceans and the mountains and their range in different countries of the world. But
on the other hand
, in
this
era of information technology all the above mentioned information and maps and current weather reports are available
instaneously
on personal computers, smart phones, via Google search engine. Even uneducated
also
able to understand it
in an exhaustive manner
thoroughly
thouroughly
.
Hence
studying
Geography
in depth is not essential at higher education or primary education levels.
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However, basic
However basic
knowledge
in
Geography
in essential for every student.
On the contrary
, familiarity or
knowledge
in other life essential or science subjects like STEM-Science, Techonology, English and Mathematics are highly desirable in
this
current age of neck throat competition to get a job in
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the market
a market
market
in order to survive.
For example
, in a survey conducted by British primary and higher education council,
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a few years
few years
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ago, 90
ago 90
% of pupils have chosen STEM subjects after their graduation compared to Social sciences and Arts. Not only for job purpose, Science gives valuable
knowledge
in day to day needs and at times saves the life of fellow passengers in the form of
first
aid
for instance
in a road traffic
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accident
accidents
or plain crashes.
In addition
, being expert in English language, one can manage in all over the world, even without
further
gross
knowledge
in other subjects as people will be impressed by language skills and respond to help us. To conclude, choosing only
Geography
and devoting all time on it is not much productive, in comparison to STEM subjects in terms of future job and learning life skills.

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