Some people think that all children should learn geography in school. However… October 30, 2018 By bw However…some others think that it is more important to learn subjects that are more relevant to life. What is your opinion?

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It is true that studying

Geography

in school is important. I agree partially with

this

opinion and

also

supports that studying other important subjects like Science, Mathematics,

Tecnology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

Technology

and English are

also

most vital

Suggestion

more vital

than studying

Geography

only, especially STEM subjects.

To begin

with, by studying

Geography

, one can acquire

knowledge

about the Earth, the Oceans and the mountains and their range in different countries of the world. But

on the other hand

, in

this

era of information technology all the above mentioned information and maps and current weather reports are available

instaneously

on personal computers, smart phones, via Google search engine. Even uneducated

also

able to understand it

thouroughly

in an exhaustive manner

thoroughly

Hence

studying

Geography

in depth is not essential at higher education or primary education levels.

However basic

Accept comma addition

However, basic

knowledge

Geography

in essential for every student.

On the contrary

, familiarity or

knowledge

in other life essential or science subjects like STEM-Science, Techonology, English and Mathematics are highly desirable in

this

current age of neck throat competition to get a job in

market

Suggestion

the market

a market

in order to survive.

For example

, in a survey conducted by British primary and higher education council,

few years

Suggestion

a few years

ago 90

Accept comma addition

ago, 90

% of pupils have chosen STEM subjects after their graduation compared to Social sciences and Arts. Not only for job purpose, Science gives valuable

knowledge

in day to day needs and at times saves the life of fellow passengers in the form of

first

aid

for instance

in a road traffic

accidents

Suggestion

accident

or plain crashes.

In addition

, being expert in English language, one can manage in all over the world, even without

further

gross

knowledge

in other subjects as people will be impressed by language skills and respond to help us. To conclude, choosing only

Geography

and devoting all time on it is not much productive, in comparison to STEM subjects in terms of future job and learning life skills.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Some people think that all children should learn geography in school. However… October 30, 2018 By bw However…some others think that it is more important to learn subjects that are more relevant to life. What is your opinion?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing important. What problems dose this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

some people think that more money should be spend on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of valuable money. and provide your own opinion.

2.2 More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science. Why is this happening? What are the effects of this?

Write about the following topic: A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoid stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience?