Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific world, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Since the beginning of the twentieth century,
mankind
have been conducting
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has been conducting
has conducted
researches
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research
and discovering new
information
of
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about
the modern
world
in the aspects of science, business and the academic
world
. Even though it is widely regarded that
mankind
should not resist sharing as much
information
as they can to others in the science, business and the academic
world
, it has
also
be
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been
regarded by others that newly discovered
knowledge
is too precious to be widely distributed. As far as I am concerned,
knowledge
, being the key to
development
, should be generously shared for the growth of humanity in our ever-developing
world
.
Information
in terms of
knowledge
should be freely shared to our global society
for
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in
the
development
of the modern
world
. Without the sharing and distribution of newly discovered
information
,
mankind
will lag behind its
development
as humans should work together in making the
world
a better place to live in for each other. Through the sharing of
information
, less time, cost and effort will be needed to tackle any global issues that surfaces
such
as an epidemic, issues in food technology and modern transportation.
For example
, history
has showed
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has shown
mankind
that the discovery of vaccines
could only managed
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could only manage
to cease the outbreak of the bubonic plague that threatened the lives of billions of people after the
knowledge
on the derivation of vaccines were shared across the
world
.
In other words
, people should not withhold sharing new
information
as people depend on each other to advance and thrive.
On the contrary
, if
information
falls in the wrong hands, it may be exploited by people to commit the most terrible crimes.
This
is due to the fact that acquiring
knowledge
can allow humans to help each
other but
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other, but
also
to destroy each other through reaping benefits at the expense of another. The incidence of warfare across history has shown that the widespread
information
on the
development
of firearms has cost the lives of many as stronger nations conquer the weaker nations to take control of their economy and exploiting their resources. Apart from that, the
knowledge
on
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of
computer
hackings
one who works hard at boring tasks
hacking
has
allow
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allowed
cyber criminals to
pry
profit from in an exploitatory manner
prey
on the lives of many famous people and
consequently
destroying their reputation by leaking their private and confidential details to the public. To sum up my point,
information
can be wrongly used to destroy the lives of others. In a nutshell,
information
can be shared without restrictions as
knowledge
is the key for
mankind
to
prosper
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prosperity
; yet it can be detrimental when it is abused by the wrong hands. I am more inclined to believe that distributing
information
should not be controlled as the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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